Second Draft of Magazine Advert

This is the second draft of my magazine advert. The changes that I have made to the magazine advert are based on the feedback that I gave myself for the first draft edit of the magazine advert.

For this second draft of the magazine advert, I have changed the font to make it stand out more against the blue background. I have also changed the tone of the photographs back to the natural tone so that they stand out more against the blue background.

To improve the second draft of this magazine advert, I think I need to add the logos of some social media sites where the artist can be found and change the font again so that it is unique and stands out from other magazine adverts.